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Mattyk 10-02-2005 03:51 PM

Feedback please
 
This is a project for one of my classes, we have to work with a local business and create a website for them. The business I'm doing is a coffee shop/internet cafe, pretty cool place with plasma TVs, free wireless internet, etc.

This is the homepage so far, I'm just looking for some feedback. Thanks!

[url]http://www.thewarpath.net/project/index.htm[/url]

skinznut 10-02-2005 04:13 PM

Re: Feedback please
 
I like the design. Simple and elegant. I think Caffe should be Cafe.

skinsfanthru&thru 10-02-2005 05:31 PM

Re: Feedback please
 
I like the look. good choice of colors and background as well. it'd be even sweeter if u somehow hide the skins logo somewhere on the site :biggthump

Mattyk 10-02-2005 06:52 PM

Re: Feedback please
 
[QUOTE=skinznut]I like the design. Simple and elegant. I think Caffe should be Cafe.[/QUOTE]

Caffe is the way they spell it for some reason, it's not a typo

Gmanc711 10-02-2005 07:19 PM

Re: Feedback please
 
I like it, thats actually a really good design. Its simple, but looks niice. Open that place for real by my house :). In all seriousness though, it looks good and seems like it would be a site that is easy to navigate, which is always a plus.

skinznut 10-02-2005 08:54 PM

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One more suggestion. Down at the bottom you have their "catch phrase" "Where coffee is an art". I think that should be placed just below the logo at the top.

firstdown 10-03-2005 04:23 PM

Re: Feedback please
 
I realy like the layout. The only question I have is this a site to sell their products or mainly to promote the shop? The reason I ask if it is to sell their product you may want to do more to attract the buyer to shopping area. Like have a flavor of the day or special of the week. This would attract the buyer into the shopping area.

TheMalcolmConnection 10-03-2005 04:53 PM

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Overall, the design works great. Colors go together well.

Just something from a former designer's perspective: Do you have any way to left-align but still center the "products"? It's easier for people to read left to right rather than jump from the end of a word that's longer than the word below.

bjschmonsees 10-03-2005 05:00 PM

Re: Feedback please
 
[QUOTE=skinznut]One more suggestion. Down at the bottom you have their "catch phrase" "Where coffee is an art". I think that should be placed just below the logo at the top.[/QUOTE]

And make it bigger

That Guy 10-03-2005 06:10 PM

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i'd consider left aligning the menu and putting it on the left side of the page, putting it as a center column makes it slightly more confusing. Looks good though.

Bozzy 10-03-2005 06:14 PM

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I like it. It creates a good image for the Coffee shop.

EternalEnigma21 10-03-2005 06:41 PM

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I like it, but I'd add a coule of scantilly clad women. Other than that its very easy on the eyes, and classy.

Mattyk 10-03-2005 08:14 PM

Re: Feedback please
 
Thanks for the idea guys, this is just a 'rough draft' that I have to present to the class tomorrow night, but now I have some ideas to build on when I go back to the drawing board.

thanks again


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