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AnonEmouse · 03-27-2004, 07:15 AM

Jason (assuming that's your name) it's not you, it's your post. You need to use punctuation, or at least decent line spacing.

If you aren't sure what we mean, at least hit return a couple of times after each sentence - space it out so it's readable.

For example, which of the 2 following paragraphs is easier to read?:

I am a redskins fan and have been for 20 years and have been to washington and i have seen the skins and have been a big fan of darrell green i am 37 and i am english and live in england i dont post with my real name and details as i sometimes post from work and dont want to get into trouble

Or

I am a Redskins fan and have been for 20 years. I have been to Washington and seen the Skins play. I am a big fan of Darrell Green.

I am 37, English and I live in England.

I don't post with my real name and details, as I sometimes post from work and don't want to get into trouble.

Hope you see what I mean, and understand it is far from personal. We all want to get along.

03-27-2004, 07:15 AM	#1
AnonEmouse Playmaker Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: UK Age: 59 Posts: 2,641	Jason (assuming that's your name) it's not you, it's your post. You need to use punctuation, or at least decent line spacing. If you aren't sure what we mean, at least hit return a couple of times after each sentence - space it out so it's readable. For example, which of the 2 following paragraphs is easier to read?: I am a redskins fan and have been for 20 years and have been to washington and i have seen the skins and have been a big fan of darrell green i am 37 and i am english and live in england i dont post with my real name and details as i sometimes post from work and dont want to get into trouble Or I am a Redskins fan and have been for 20 years. I have been to Washington and seen the Skins play. I am a big fan of Darrell Green. I am 37, English and I live in England. I don't post with my real name and details, as I sometimes post from work and don't want to get into trouble. Hope you see what I mean, and understand it is far from personal. We all want to get along.