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tryfuhl · 12-04-2008, 01:21 AM

Good article, nice to see the shoutout to here

just a few errors I caught, not trolling, just know as a writer I like to minimize these

"Why do the Redskins struggled in games they shouldn’t and get beat bad by elite teams? "

should be struggle

"When do other fans start to sya that about us?"

say

"Your right. Exactly right. "

You're

"Could it be we have inferior lines that stop the rest form execution?"

from

"Do teams get convert third and longs on us because we only rush 4 and they can apply absolutely no pressure?"

Do teams convert*

not trying to nitpick, just some ones that stood out.. let me know if you prefer another avenue to receive these type of things (or if you don't care/would rather not)

anyways, great article and loved the last line

"Isn’t there such a thing as front office malpractice?"

12-04-2008, 01:21 AM	#9
tryfuhl Gamebreaker Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Waldorf, MD Age: 42 Posts: 12,514	Re: Editorial: Why the Redskins aren't an Elite Team Good article, nice to see the shoutout to here just a few errors I caught, not trolling, just know as a writer I like to minimize these "Why do the Redskins struggled in games they shouldn’t and get beat bad by elite teams? " should be struggle "When do other fans start to sya that about us?" say "Your right. Exactly right. " You're "Could it be we have inferior lines that stop the rest form execution?" from "Do teams get convert third and longs on us because we only rush 4 and they can apply absolutely no pressure?" Do teams convert* not trying to nitpick, just some ones that stood out.. let me know if you prefer another avenue to receive these type of things (or if you don't care/would rather not) anyways, great article and loved the last line "Isn’t there such a thing as front office malpractice?"